An intelligent, articulate and focused on the question. You include splendid examples from your own production and from real productions whilst integrating theory into your commentary.
One issue, you discuss the thematic links to produce a coherent package re the print productions. You may find you repeat in question 2 which focuses on the coherence of the entire promotional package particularly when discussing panels 2 & 3.
I suggest you review this section of an otherwise excellent response and focus on:
1) How you used the conventional four panel box set
2) The use of conventions of a front panel of an album pack. Think abut the position of text, the integration of text with image integration of text with image.
3) The font you used, the position of the text placing of it compared to a real production etc. Upload the album art (front panel) of a real artist and compare how you used or developed conventions.
4) Panels 2 and 3 focus on the layout and the conventions of the CD cradle on Panel 3.
5) Panel 4 is fine but you need a comparison from a real back panel of an album box set in order to explain how yours may challenge the format used in the example from a real product.
This section is splendidly evaluated but is likely to be repeated in Question 2. It's your evaluation of Panels 1 and 2 that are the main problem because you continually relate to the music video...which is stepping on the territory of question 2.
A potentially strong Level 4 with revisions re digipak evaluation.......focus on layout and how you used the conventions of layout.
An intelligent, articulate and focused on the question. You include splendid examples from your own production and from real productions whilst integrating theory into your commentary.
ReplyDeleteOne issue, you discuss the thematic links to produce a coherent package re the print productions. You may find you repeat in question 2 which focuses on the coherence of the entire promotional package particularly when discussing panels 2 & 3.
I suggest you review this section of an otherwise excellent response and focus on:
1) How you used the conventional four panel box set
2) The use of conventions of a front panel of an album pack. Think abut the position of text, the integration of text with image integration of text with image.
3) The font you used, the position of the text placing of it compared to a real production etc. Upload the album art (front panel) of a real artist and compare how you used or developed conventions.
4) Panels 2 and 3 focus on the layout and the conventions of the CD cradle on Panel 3.
5) Panel 4 is fine but you need a comparison from a real back panel of an album box set in order to explain how yours may challenge the format used in the example from a real product.
This section is splendidly evaluated but is likely to be repeated in Question 2. It's your evaluation of Panels 1 and 2 that are the main problem because you continually relate to the music video...which is stepping on the territory of question 2.
A potentially strong Level 4 with revisions re digipak evaluation.......focus on layout and how you used the conventions of layout.